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Water Colossus

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Water Colossus
My 2nd entry for the contest
My 1st entry Fire Colossus [link]
it a lady monster, it can do swim, dive, fly, eat, fart :D :rofl:
and i think it can do salsa too :rofl:

ok, sorry bad joke, here it is the explanation from my creature
concept of this monster is, is a blend of deep-sea creatures, jelly fish, and crabs are also flying fish. special abilities of this monster is this is a leader of all the monsters in the world rift. This is a graceful, ruthless, cunning, and smart. master of black magic, this slim, so has the speed, and because it has the wings of flying fish, then this also can jump high like flying.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Overall, this is one great art. I'm actually surprised that an artist with a talent such as yours still requested critiques. I applaud your willingness to keep on learning no matter if the one to criticize you is no expert, such as me. ^^a

I'm giving an _almost_ perfect score for this excellent work, with the only thing I feel a bit lacking is the water bubbles. I believe you need more of their size and shape variations to give more 'wow' feeling to the viewers.

For example, if you add some big bubbles near the edge of the painting, it will give more of the feeling of a great splash appeared when it pops out of the water. And maybe you shouldn't made all the bubbles shaped as round, if you give some that were stretching out as if it's about to form a bubble out of water, it'll also give more feel to it.

And that's about it. The rest is perfect. Just perfect. d^^b